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Capturing Bluestar
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A glimpse of glossy blue-gray fur. A flash of sparkling blue eyes. A swish of a tail. Suddenly, a cat shoots out of the bushes, running, the muscles rippling under the soft pelt, the pads drumming onto the earth a fast rhythm. The she-cat is long, lean, and majestic. A mighty, formiddable force that I would not want to cross any day. She makes her kill, dargging it into the great, leafy forest that makes this cat look so small. We follow her into a clearing with many cats; she deposits her kill on a pile, leaps up onto a high rock, and yowls. Instantly, the cats go quiet. The leader stands up. Time seemes to freeze. The majestic, powerful aura. The glimmering blue-gray pelt. The deep, knowing blue eyes. It all comes together in the breath, this moment. Bluestar.
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A glimpse of glossy blue-gray fur. A flash of sparkling blue eyes. A swish of a tail. Suddenly, a cat shoots out of the bushes, running, the muscles rippling under the soft pelt, the pads drumming onto the earth a fast rhythm. The she-cat is long, lean, and majestic. A mighty, formiddable force that I would not want to cross any day. She makes her kill, dargging it into the great, leafy forest that makes this cat look so small. We follow her into a clearing with many cats; she deposits her kill on a pile, leaps up onto a high rock, and yowls. Instantly, the cats go quiet. The leader stands up. Time seemes to freeze. The majestic, powerful aura. The glimmering blue-gray pelt. The deep, knowing blue eyes. It all comes together in the breath, this moment. Bluestar.
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