Here's the enters he/she did:
Capturing Bluestar
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A glimpse of glossy blue-gray fur. A flash of sparkling blue eyes. A swish of a tail. Suddenly, a cat shoots out of the bushes, running, the muscles rippling under the soft pelt, the pads drumming onto the earth a fast rhythm. The she-cat is long, lean, and majestic. A mighty, formiddable force that I would not want to cross any day. She makes her kill, dargging it into the great, leafy forest that makes this cat look so small. We follow her into a clearing with many cats; she deposits her kill on a pile, leaps up onto a high rock, and yowls. Instantly, the cats go quiet. The leader stands up. Time seemes to freeze. The majestic, powerful aura. The glimmering blue-gray pelt. The deep, knowing blue eyes. It all comes together in the breath, this moment. Bluestar.
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A glimpse of glossy blue-gray fur. A flash of sparkling blue eyes. A swish of a tail. Suddenly, a cat shoots out of the bushes, running, the muscles rippling under the soft pelt, the pads drumming onto the earth a fast rhythm. The she-cat is long, lean, and majestic. A mighty, formiddable force that I would not want to cross any day. She makes her kill, dargging it into the great, leafy forest that makes this cat look so small. We follow her into a clearing with many cats; she deposits her kill on a pile, leaps up onto a high rock, and yowls. Instantly, the cats go quiet. The leader stands up. Time seemes to freeze. The majestic, powerful aura. The glimmering blue-gray pelt. The deep, knowing blue eyes. It all comes together in the breath, this moment. Bluestar.
I thought it was awesome! They used a lot of good words and description.
Here's the code: i made it safe so people won't copy it by putting your name on it.
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hi.. I um have a poem I would like to share.
ReplyDeleteWelcome To Earth
I see the moon as it passes by
and I know this is Earth
with it's beutiful night sky
and It's cars passing by
I notice as I look up
a bird flys by
O peaceful mountains
O shining rivers
welcome to Earth
where all imaginations fly
soo theres my poem I hope you like it!
Cool I like it!
ReplyDeleteI know! It describes Earthi n the simplest of ways. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I turned on comment mod on Oliveclan. Can you please give me the code? I really like the banner! :)
(and I changed my name)
I'll be right there.
ReplyDeletei couldn't put it on ur blog so I'm putting the code on my post cuz it wouldn't let me comment the code on. sorry!
ReplyDeleteIt's okay! I put the banner on three of my blogs: Ocean (www.symbolsocean.blogspot.com), Warrior Cats (www.warriorsymbol.blogspot.com), and Oliveclan (www.oliveclan.blogspot.com). Thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteNo problem!
ReplyDeleteThis is my poem called Life!
ReplyDeleteThe swift breeze
The night air
I turn and see
The mountains behind me
The trees are tall
The waves crash
The grass rustles
The river ripples
Sunlight
Moonlight
This is life
This I call Beauty...
ReplyDeleteThe sun sets
The moon rises
Clouds roll across the sky
Evening falls
Moonlight falls across the mountain
Bathing it in a soft white light
The leaves of the trees rustle
In the soft wind
Stars glitter high above
Beauty
Nature
Beauty
Those are very nice! I'll post them.
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