Symbols51's Poems

Bluestar's River
*****
I fall.
The water hits my back, driving the wind from my lungs.
I feel weak.
Nothing I do helps.
I just drift
in this blue,
silent world
Unable to swim.
A figure comes towards me.
Oakheart?
No.
Firestar.

Bluestar's Reconcile
♣♣♣♣♣♣
On the river's sandy beach
weak
and dying
A shadow
of the mighty leader
I once was.
I gaze at my kits,
pride in my eyes.
I speak
and slip away
to Starclan.

These are wonderful! You've captured the essence of what Bluestar was feeling in her last moments.